fooljoe
Well-known member
Here's my (ok mostly my wife's) last second attempt:
-or perhaps-
of course, the words could be changed again pretty easily
-or perhaps-
of course, the words could be changed again pretty easily
Really well done, the only thing is that it conveys "on the go" which might exclude the idea of a semi-permanent home solution in some people's minds. A lot of our customers order the upgrade as a replacement for an expensive wall-mounted station at home. Amazingly, roughly one out of 10 customers even order two units!
I'd not mention 240v, because again, not all people (yet) know what that is. This is how we arrived at "Charge your LEAF twice as fast". The viewer doesn't need to know any terms, but it's a short message that gets it across. It doesn't convey the "low-cost" aspect, so I added another line. I'd definitely stay away from the word "Brick". =)fooljoe said:Ya, I'm actually one of those customers who's using it in lieu of a wall-mount, and I'm hoping to upgrade my second unit for the "on the go" part. It's just hard to convey everything with few words, so I was hoping the "save cash" part would speak to the idea of using it instead of an expensive wall installation. I was toying with something like "240V with/from your Nissan 'brick'" instead of 240V on the go. What do you think about that? Or perhaps "240V for less (newline) bring your brick to the next level".
Randmac said:
+1 I'd like to change my vote. This is definitely clean and clear. Having the picture of the EVSE on there would definitely help anyone who may be confused what an EVSE is. Maybe change the "240v on the go" to "240v at home or on the go". Or, if you really want to avoid 240v, how about this:Ingineer said:Awesome, I like this one:
<snip>
Really well done, the only thing is that it conveys "on the go" which might exclude the idea of a semi-permanent home solution in some people's minds.
<snip>
I'd also avoid the use of EVSE, as most people have no idea what that is. In hindsight I'd probably not have even named our website that.
charge faster on the go
and save cash at home
evseupgrade.com
I actually kind of like this one. It would be cool if the fishing rod and line were the EVSE and J1772 connector. Plus punch up the colors and production quality a bit.Randmac said:
fooljoe said:Ok, here it is with the same words as the current banner:
LEAFfan said:+1...and I take issue with "It's got"....should be 'It has'...similar to America's Got Talent which is poor grammar too. It should be 'America Has Talent'.mogur said:So far I like Ingineers version the best...
GeekEV said:-1
NOT a fan of animated ads at all, even though you see them everywhere.
Yes, This is great, I think overall it looks very professional!fooljoe said:Ok, here it is with the same words as the current banner:
I've never said I wanted an animated ad, and I'm also normally not a fan. That being said, I like it and the animation isn't too garish or in your face. I don't know if I'd want to subject everyone to it though, even if it's more effective. They are also bandwidth intensive.Skywagon said:GeekEV said:-1
NOT a fan of animated ads at all, even though you see them everywhere.
The reason they are seen so frequently is that they get attention, and that is what Phil said he wanted to do. Plus, the original post did not define no animated ideas. I had not seen it discussed or offered as an option so I created one.
I like this one the best, too. If you want to keep it short but cram more in without the animation, why not just say "Home & portable low cost charging" instead of "Low cost charging solutions"? It's only 1 more word plus a "&".Ingineer said:Yes, This is great, I think overall it looks very professional!fooljoe said:Ok, here it is with the same words as the current banner:
-Phil
Enter your email address to join: